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2016-12-06 06:36
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摘要：
看過(guò)雅思寫作范文的同學(xué)都知道，每篇文章都有一個(gè)漂亮的結(jié)尾。
那么如何才能把結(jié)尾寫的很漂亮，而不是畫蛇添足呢？小編整理了下如何寫出完美的雅思作文結(jié)尾，快來(lái)看看吧。
回顧全文+觀點(diǎn)+展望：
這種結(jié)尾方式適合雙邊結(jié)構(gòu)的作文，要注意的是結(jié)尾段由三個(gè)要素組成，其中第2個(gè)要素是必須的，句子的數(shù)量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1個(gè)句子。比如說(shuō)：
I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways。
例句中作者將自己的觀點(diǎn)隱藏在了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句之后，起到欲揚(yáng)先抑的效果。但是這種效果必須搭配一個(gè)展望未來(lái)才能起到渲染的效果。再看個(gè)例子：
In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible。
2個(gè)句子都使用了相似的銜接方式，即首句委婉地回顧全文，將觀點(diǎn)的對(duì)立面用"讓步"的方式表達(dá)出來(lái)，同時(shí)也是對(duì)于主體段觀點(diǎn)的回顧。然后再是用轉(zhuǎn)折闡述自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)。*后再用一個(gè)對(duì)于未來(lái)的期望來(lái)支撐自己的觀點(diǎn)。這種順序安排的優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于對(duì)于文章的主體有很好的總結(jié)，但同時(shí)觀點(diǎn)又是非常鮮明有力的，加上對(duì)于未來(lái)的潤(rùn)色，使得表達(dá)更流暢。用同樣的方法，我們?cè)賮?lái)看第三個(gè)例句：
To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability。
和前2個(gè)結(jié)尾不同，第三個(gè)結(jié)尾盡管也是先回顧了全文，但是它將作者的觀點(diǎn)和對(duì)未來(lái)的期望寫在了一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句里。如此就給出了我們?cè)跇?gòu)造"展望未來(lái)"時(shí)的一個(gè)思路，即搭配條件狀語(yǔ)從句或者介賓短語(yǔ)跟在觀點(diǎn)句之后。此種結(jié)尾發(fā)展方式同樣適用于分析解決型大作文的結(jié)尾段布局，比如：
All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore。
毒品對(duì)社會(huì)的危害，作者先承認(rèn)現(xiàn)狀無(wú)法改變，進(jìn)然后樂(lè)觀地闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，也就是采取切實(shí)有效的行動(dòng)后可以減弱其危害。*后用毒品的危害性來(lái)對(duì)未來(lái)作展望。在社會(huì)類分析解決型議論文中，展望未來(lái)時(shí)可以考慮用強(qiáng)調(diào)其長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的影響作為突破口。比如：
In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have to change if the country's people are to achieve their full potential。
如果寫出漂亮的文章結(jié)尾，現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們應(yīng)該有所了解了吧，小編希望通過(guò)這篇文章，同學(xué)們對(duì)寫作可以有所精益。
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回顧全文+觀點(diǎn)+展望：
這種結(jié)尾方式適合雙邊結(jié)構(gòu)的作文，要注意的是結(jié)尾段由三個(gè)要素組成，其中第2個(gè)要素是必須的，句子的數(shù)量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1個(gè)句子。比如說(shuō)：
I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways。
例句中作者將自己的觀點(diǎn)隱藏在了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句之后，起到欲揚(yáng)先抑的效果。但是這種效果必須搭配一個(gè)展望未來(lái)才能起到渲染的效果。再看個(gè)例子：
In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible。
2個(gè)句子都使用了相似的銜接方式，即首句委婉地回顧全文，將觀點(diǎn)的對(duì)立面用"讓步"的方式表達(dá)出來(lái)，同時(shí)也是對(duì)于主體段觀點(diǎn)的回顧。然后再是用轉(zhuǎn)折闡述自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)。*后再用一個(gè)對(duì)于未來(lái)的期望來(lái)支撐自己的觀點(diǎn)。這種順序安排的優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于對(duì)于文章的主體有很好的總結(jié)，但同時(shí)觀點(diǎn)又是非常鮮明有力的，加上對(duì)于未來(lái)的潤(rùn)色，使得表達(dá)更流暢。用同樣的方法，我們?cè)賮?lái)看第三個(gè)例句：
To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability。
和前2個(gè)結(jié)尾不同，第三個(gè)結(jié)尾盡管也是先回顧了全文，但是它將作者的觀點(diǎn)和對(duì)未來(lái)的期望寫在了一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句里。如此就給出了我們?cè)跇?gòu)造"展望未來(lái)"時(shí)的一個(gè)思路，即搭配條件狀語(yǔ)從句或者介賓短語(yǔ)跟在觀點(diǎn)句之后。此種結(jié)尾發(fā)展方式同樣適用于分析解決型大作文的結(jié)尾段布局，比如：
All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore。
毒品對(duì)社會(huì)的危害，作者先承認(rèn)現(xiàn)狀無(wú)法改變，進(jìn)然后樂(lè)觀地闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，也就是采取切實(shí)有效的行動(dòng)后可以減弱其危害。*后用毒品的危害性來(lái)對(duì)未來(lái)作展望。在社會(huì)類分析解決型議論文中，展望未來(lái)時(shí)可以考慮用強(qiáng)調(diào)其長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的影響作為突破口。比如：
In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have to change if the country's people are to achieve their full potential。
如果寫出漂亮的文章結(jié)尾，現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們應(yīng)該有所了解了吧，小編希望通過(guò)這篇文章，同學(xué)們對(duì)寫作可以有所精益。
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